Hello Everyone
We have shared some of our writing to Google Docs, there were a couple of children away at Rippa Rugby so they will catch up tomorrow. We realise that you only have one week before the holidays so we are not expecting comments but some of our success criteria were: A opening sentence which captures the readers attention, varied sentence beginnings, ideas sequenced logically and written in first person. Our holidays start on Good Friday and we are back on 19th April, (only 1 week difference this time). good luck for your assembly. Have a look at Kidzi and you will see some of the things that have been happening around our school.
http://sites.google.com/site/kidzipaper/
Bye for now
Mr H
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